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Chapter 8

by KobraBlaze 3 Reviews

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2012/04/16 - Updated: 2012/04/17 - 1461 words - Complete

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  • The Mysterious Boy

    (#) Frankies_Hands 2012-04-16 06:07:09 PM

    Frank and Gerars are so protective of Mikey and I find that very sweet. It's so cute when Mikey admits to his liking of Frank's kiss but dammit Gerard! Did you have to come that fast?!?
    -xoxoL

    Author's response

    Yes, Frank and Gerard are very protective and I'm really glad this came through in the chapter. Gerard did ruin a moment there between them but dont worry! Next chapter has more stuff like that!
  • The Mysterious Boy

    (#) tortillachip 2012-04-16 06:35:40 PM

    I'm glad Frank was there to help Mikey. He really does deserve the help Frank wants to give him. I also liked that Mikey told Frank what he thought about the kiss. It seems as if he's starting to trust him enough to even talk to him after what happened before. It really does show that Frank cares about Mikey and wants to protect him. Gerard does too, but Frank is really trying to work towards it. I thought this chapter was really well written. Great job!!!

    Author's response

    It was a really important element in this chapter to show how much Frank cares and how much he is trying so I'm very happy that came through. We do see the start of Mikey beginning to trust Frank but is still a little wary. Thank you for reading and leaving a lovely review!
  • The Mysterious Boy

    (#) DisenchatedDestroya 2012-04-16 11:16:51 PM

    Poor Mikey! It seriously does never stop for him and I think that justifies Gerard's almost over-protectiveness of him. I thought that it was interesting the way that Frank defended Mikey; he was forceful and fierce, but was ever-mindful that he couldn't afford to scare Mikey anymore than he was already. I loved they way that Frank was thinking about Mikey, kinda like he's a little kid in need of being protected from the big scary world. Frank just wants to protect and help him, make him feel safe and loved, and that came across really well in this chapter. As did Mikey's reasons for being the way he is; who wouldn't be after a lifetime of getting beaten up like that?

    Anyway, great job and I absolutely loved this chapter. Well done! :D

    Author's response

    Nothing good is really happening to Mikey at all and I'm glad that brings through Gerards over-protectiveness. Frank being mindful of Mikey was quite a big part of this chapter particularly, and you picked it up perfectly! I'm delighted Franks protectiveness came through in this chapter and also that you saw pity for Mikey which is something I'm not sure got through enough in the story! Thank you soooo much for the really kind review!

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