(#) CosmicZombie 2012-04-18This is brilliant! I can't wait to read more- I'm loving Gerard's character in this, the way he's such a social outcast, yet still quirky and interesting in his own way. I can't wait to find out more about Frank's character either xD
Eagerly awaiting your next update! :D
Author's responseThank you! :D I'm glad you like him! There shall be a lot more Frank on the way so I hope not to disappoint C:
You shall see it around soon!
(#) jack-the-ripper 2012-04-18Great chapter!
About the like thing, I started thinking about that after I submited the review and it makes sense lol,
it's also really cool that you took the time to answer my review and explain it to me. And don't get me wrong - I really like your style of writing this :)
Author's responseThank you!
Ah good haha! It was no problem, I believe if you've taken the time to leave such a lovely and helpful review the least I can do is reply C:
Thanks again xD
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2012-05-22This is actually brilliant. I don't think I've read a fanfiction in 2nd person present tense but it really works. The writing is genius, really natural but like...yeah. I loved this:
“-cause people seem to have all these little loops and settings in their heads and like some of it’s the simple stuff like not walking under ladders or keeping the volume at an even number on your TV, but then it’s the same for bigger things too like how everyone thought for so long sitting next to someone with AIDs on the bus could kill you and no one seems to even notice how stupid our brains are”
That whole paragraph just made me sit back and say "Huh."
Author's responseSo literally logging on to these reviews is the best way to end a day like ever
Also I don't actually know what 2nd person present tense is (/I'm dumb I know/) so I'm gonna google the shit out of that now!
I'm so glad!
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