(#) DisenchatedDestroya 2012-04-17Awwww, this chapter's so cute! I loved how this part ended, kind of bittersweet because Mikey had a nightmare but at least he had Frank to make it all better. I thought it was very clever of you to loop it back round to Mikey saying "sorry" like he did when he first met Mikey; it showed that things aren't necessarily going to get better easily and quickly, but they will get better now that they have each other. I really liked it when Mikey exploded, telling them both how he truly feels inside. That bit was very well-done and it made me feel even more sympathetic towards Mikey.
Great job and I can't wait for more! :D
Author's responseThank you! I'm glad you saw both sides to the ending. The horrible fact that Mikey had a nightmare but also that Frank was able to make it better for him. I'm sooooo delighted that you got that point about Mikey saying 'sorry' and how things may not have changed. That is something I was hoping to get through! I feel that the part where Mikey exploded was finally when he admitted to it all like everything he hates about himself so I'm happy that you thought it was okay. Thank you very very much for all of your kind reviews. I should have a chapter up soon enough tonight! :)
(#) CO_toxicMelody 2012-04-18asdfghjkl; :3
so freaking cute!!! please keep writing! its super good and im seriously going to be sad when It all ends D:
Keep up the good work! I cant help but love mikey to bits!!!!!:D
Author's responseThank you! I'm really happy you liked it. It is really nice to hear that you want me to keep writing and that I will! Thank you for such an uplifting review! :)
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