(#) Echelonfrommars 2012-04-18And this is what I love about you,your honesty. Your poems and stories are always so real and full of emotion.How do you do that? And I really hope you'll feel better soon :) Whoever/whatever made you feel that way isn't worth your time ;)
Author's responseThank you so much, that's a really big compliment. I don't really know how I do it...it's just how I write, I guess :L Thanks..it was a 'whoever'.
Thanks for taking the time to review :D
(#) lorddepresser 2012-04-18i think i know how you felt when you wrote tis poem, i dont know why but your poems i can always sort of relate to and i dont normally like poems but yours are good because there ture emotions that your feeling
Author's responseThat's a really big compliment- I'm glad you like my poems and thanks so much for taking the time to review :D
(#) DisenchatedDestroya 2012-04-18I know I say this in every review, so sorry for sounding boring, but this is incredible. Each time you write a poem you seem to be getting better and better, I really envy your talent!
But this poem, it was really deep and made me think about things; about being blinded from the truth, from what people truly are because that's the way the world has taught us to function. Just smile and be normal, don't question anything because as long as we don't them then they can't question themselves. I don't know if that's what this was trying to say, bur that's kinda what it made me think of.
My favorite line was probably "Scars of fallacy and fictitious lips,". It was a wonderful metaphor and created a great sense of imagery.
Anyway, sorry for leaving such a long-ass review.
Great job on an amazing piece of poetry! :D
Author's responseIt's not at all boring! I love your reviews :D I envy YOUR talent, honey, so don't envy mine :L
I hadn't actually seen this poem that way- for once, this was a much more personal piece of writing, but I'm really glad it made you think like that, because that's another side to it I really think about and I totally get what you mean.
I so rarely write poetry that's this personal, so I'm glad you liked it and thanks so much for taking the time (again) to leave such a lovely review!
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