Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > For the love of (insert heroic/religious figure here, in my case Gerard)!15 Reviews
Am I the only person who is sick of this shizz?
Another small complaint is the descriptions of your characters. I would suggestion to stop with the full on paragraph of what they're wearing. It's not important know they're wearing, lets say: Black ripped skinny jeans, beat up converse, black Misfit t-shirt with white lettering, checkered socks,red bra and underwear, ten bracelets, a heart shaped locket, black nail polish, etc. etc. I really wish I were exagerating but I'm not. You can sneak it in there by saying something like "I started to panic when my black skinny jeans got caught on the fence as I hopped over" or something. And lets face it, a lot of the time I feel like everyone describes the same person. Not everyone has side swept fringe covering their left eye and there are othere types of jeans besides black skinnies. THere are plenty of other eye colors out there besides blue and hazel and just because you have brown eyes doesn't mean they have to be boring or dull. I, for example, love my very common colored brown eyes. When I look at them they are bright like honey and filled with a youthful energy despite the fact that I lead a very dull unhappy life.
I AM aware that I suck at writing and that I may be offending some people, I'm sorry, but I also think I've made some valid points. Feel free to comment away and let your thoughts flow. I'll listen.
And last but not least...
If ANYONE out there has anything to recommend let me know. I like long, well written stories with boy-girl pairings. I'm not a fan of a shit ton of other bands appearing or other random characters constantly coming into the story because it kind of throws it off sometimes. If they update at a steady pace then it's a plus. Or if it's an older story you've read and enjoyed, thats cool too.