- Hi, I'm a new reader for your story and i made an account here just so i could comment on your story.
I love it, your use of words and metaphors really make the story so much more real for me to read. I really like how you describe all of your characters emotions and how you always mention the emotion in their eyes.
I really liked the chapter and gerard is Unfortunately being an ass again. I hope frank will feel better after crying, finally letting some of the pent up emotions out.
Can't wait until your next update.
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