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CyberTech: War of the Worlds
3 ReviewsHarry Potter Cross over with Avengers, X-Men, and Marvel Comics! Harry makes a real life for himself after he sets himself free! He turns his life around & builds a huge tech company! However, he c...
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CyberTech: War of the Worlds
(#) Lydia_Hood 2012-06-06 08:38:14 AM
So... you are transferring your story from FFnet to here my best guest is? I mean others have begun to do that so my best guest as to why this is appearing here is because of the issues with FFnet which will push some to move to other sites.
Anyhow, I do like this story, its been a while since a update has been published, I hope after reposting the chapters here you will add a new one to it.Author's response
Thanks, yeah, it does seem that I'm migrating. Though, I'm not sure whether I'll stay here as it always seems like this site is under-managed and a little neglected. I've opened an account with fic site . com too, and I'll be launching these chapters there too, to see which is best. So far it seems like that one is easier to navigate.
Anyway, either way when I launch the next chapter on ff . net. Which is chapter 18, I'm going to have up a message telling everyone where to find the chapter!
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CyberTech: War of the Worlds
(#) TxA_GunFighter 2012-06-10 08:32:29 AM
Outstanding start. This my second time reading this story. Really like it.
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CyberTech: War of the Worlds
(#) PzkwVIb 2012-06-17 09:35:52 PM
Good start, but you need a beta. Thereare a fair number of spelling and usage errors.
One grammar note: If Letters is the person's last name there should be no apostrophe, unless it is for possessive case and then it should be Letters'. It the name is Letter then loose the apostrophe and "s" unless it is being used as a possesive.