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How can I fix this?
5 ReviewsMikey fights for his life and his family can only hope and wait.
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Forever in my heart
(#) Chemical_30 2012-06-08 02:30:37 PM
Oh Mikey my heart is breaking for you!
So so glad he woke up!Author's response
Thank you so much for commenting
omg ok I wrote way more than that sigh Can't remember now. Thanks for reading and I will update again as soon as I can xo -
Forever in my heart
(#) MissAbbieHudson 2012-06-08 02:39:36 PM
OHMYBEJESUSFLIPPINGCOWBURGERSWITHHOLYMILK :O MIKEY'S AWAKE :D and you is sneaky, you didn't have to put that at the bottom! But I loved this story so much, and I felt so sad when you were going through the couples and you didn't say Mikey and Alicia, it just makes it sink in :'( I really cannot wait for the next chapter! please update soon :DxoxoxoAAuthor's response
You're so awesome!! Thank you for that. i got all emotional and teary when reading this. We have to stop being so sappy haha. Awww yeah I didn't even think of that but it felt right to go through the couples and I really wanted Ray to get into the story because I do love him even though he's never in my stories much. Shame on me. Ok getting off topic. Thank you!! This means everything to me xoxoxoxoxotoinfinityandbeyondlol -
Forever in my heart
(#) XxLiveyourlifExX 2012-06-09 09:08:17 AM
Ok. Real review time:
I LOVE this story. Great plot and you have a real knack for making readers feel what the characters are feeling. Suggestion: sometimes you have a few grammar or spelling mistakes and occasionally some things are a little confusing. I've had this problem too, and what helps me is to read over it a bunch before posting. Or even get someone else to read it and give edits (not on the story, because that's great, just on the other stuff)
But it really is wonderful and I can't wait for an update. Keep writing!
hearts,
Corri
(p.s. if you need a editor, my services are def up for grabs)Author's response
Yees real review. I love it. Thank you for the compliments and the helpful words. I know I must be making some mistakes but I'm Swedish so sometimes I don't see it or maybe don't know it's a mistake. I will get better at reading through the chapters though for sure. Thank you for the tips. Love it.
Hmmm I would actually really love using you as an editor if you'd be ok with that. Just letting me know when things are confusing or rushed and that stuff. I would very much need and want that. Maybe I can email you next time I finish a chapter before posting and get some help =) xoxo -
Forever in my heart
(#) XxLiveyourlifExX 2012-06-09 09:21:50 AM
corri.elizabeth@yahoo =)Author's response
Thank you =D I will definitely send you the next chapter when I finish it. Thank you so much for the offer xo -
Forever in my heart
(#) PartyPoisen 2012-06-24 02:33:57 AM
Oh no Poor Mikes. He is doesn't deserve the pain.