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Admitting It
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Admitting It
It's not my fault that I can't control myself,
I can't help it that I fell to the dark.
But please, give me yet another chance;
Let me reignite my inner spark.
I understand if you want to give me up,
I know it's the least I deserve.
But please, at least let me try;
I have an honour to preserve.
I'll take the pills for you, my friends,
So that I'm less of a trouble.
But please, know this now, no mistake;
You can't rebuild my rubble.
I'm the crazy electric one with fire inside,
I won't ever give that up.
But please, don't make me not change;
I need help and I'm not ashamed to admit it.
A/N: This is the first thing I've written in weeks and, reading over this, my lack of practice really shows. Sorry this sucks more than my usual works, but I really wanted/needed to get this out.
Please let me know what you think. :)
It's not my fault that I can't control myself,
I can't help it that I fell to the dark.
But please, give me yet another chance;
Let me reignite my inner spark.
I understand if you want to give me up,
I know it's the least I deserve.
But please, at least let me try;
I have an honour to preserve.
I'll take the pills for you, my friends,
So that I'm less of a trouble.
But please, know this now, no mistake;
You can't rebuild my rubble.
I'm the crazy electric one with fire inside,
I won't ever give that up.
But please, don't make me not change;
I need help and I'm not ashamed to admit it.
A/N: This is the first thing I've written in weeks and, reading over this, my lack of practice really shows. Sorry this sucks more than my usual works, but I really wanted/needed to get this out.
Please let me know what you think. :)
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