Madeline makes a mistake, but it might just save Brendon. Can he return the favor?
(#) japulapu 2012-09-05 02:47:42 AM
Cliffhanger! Interesting chapter. It was also quite humorous and you can clearly see that the two are getting really attached to each other. As usual, no grammatic errors and overall it was a really exciting chapter.
:P Thank you. I hope the next one doesn't come up short. I cut it short because I'm not too great at writing action. I'm new to it completely.
Thanks for the review, as always it was very complimentary.
Don't die NOOOO. Update more :)
:D I'll try to update asap. Thanks!
Noo! Now i cant wait for the next chapter... Update quick? Prettty please?
:P I'm trying to update tonight.
Thank you so much for the review.
(#) Mirazal 2012-09-05 05:12:41 PM
Oh my god i just found this story and it's really really good! And omg Ryan PLEASE LOVE ME
Aw thank you!
(#) Zeldafan 2012-09-06 01:39:24 PM
I keep re-reading, please make more! this is so amazing! :')
That's really sweet. Thank you so much. :D
I hope to update tonight.