I have always thought that a lot is left out of the books about Dudley. What did he see when the dementors attacked him? Why did he put that cup of tea out for Harry? Did he try to change himself...
(#) Link2000_2001 2012-10-27 08:53:03 AMNot a bad beginning only thing I could fault you on is that mrs figg probably wouldn't know most of the stuff she said in her letter to dudley. You might want to find a different character to write the letter. You could have mrs figg contact the other perdon and have him/her write it.
Author's responseShe does say sge had to check some things. It is assumed in HP canon that she must have had some way to speak to Dumbledore re Harry; and although never mentioned in my story I assume the information came that way.
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