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The Lighter Side of Hogwarts

by The_Missinglink 1 Reviews

General humorous one-shots here. I don't know how often I'll be updating this, but it won't be all that much. Rated R just in case.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Humor - Characters: Harry, Hermione, Ron - Published: 2005/06/05 - Updated: 2005/06/05 - 1556 words

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  • The Lighter Side of Hogwarts

    (#) LilithBoadicea 2005-06-06 07:38:07 PM

    The quote from Douglas Adams was the funniest part. This fic was mildly amusing but didn't actually make me laugh. Perhaps some essays on comedic timing might help? I also recommend a bit of research on the rules of punctuation for dialogue, as you have a few errors there. It's a common problem and easily corrected.

    Good luck with the next installment!

    Author's response

    :D Yea, I love that quote. Thanks a lot for the review. I think my main problem with this fic was that I kind of forced after a while, like I said I've been writing it for a long time. And also thanks for the heads up on the bad grammer, I realize now that I forgot to proof-read this one before I posted, so I'm glad you told me.

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