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After the Battle

Harry Potter's life after the battle turns out not like what he was hoping for. Completely AU and HP/DG

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Romance - Characters: Harry - Warnings: [?] - Published: 2012/12/08 - Updated: 2012/12/09 - 6487 words - Complete

Reviews

• After the Battle

  (#) Chris7100 2012-12-08 10:38:29 PM

  Magic, it's clear that English isn't your first language. You actually have an interesting story here, but it's virtually impossible to read because of the language issues. Get yourself a solid Beta to scrub your grammar and diction and keep writing. Best of luck!

• After the Battle

  (#) WHCnelson 2012-12-09 03:26:07 AM

  An interesting story until the very end. I don't think Hermione would turn to evil. But, hey. I really can't write either...

• After the Battle

  (#) fuzzwu 2012-12-09 03:43:35 AM

  A decent story but you badly need an editor. Just have someone else read it before you post and that should clear up most of the problems.

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