(#) motherwarhelena 2013-01-25"It was sort of a simple happiness, not like that of a proud man accomplished in business, but the small happiness of a child catching a butterfly after endless minutes of chasing. The child’s goal wasn’t to obtain money or materialistic things, but only to enjoy the chase and final capture of the beautiful creature, examine its intricately color-laced wings, and set it free into the air again, just so they could chase after it again."
This line you've written, my friend, is amazing. This is ART.
And by the way, it wasn't too violent so I don't mind at all. In fact I think there should be more of it. (Haha)
Please update soon!
Author's responseoh wow! Thank you! To be honest, I'm pretty proud of that line myself, no to be self-centered or anything :P I'm glad the violence wasn't too much. Thanks!!
- This was awesome!!! OMG I can't wait for more!!!!! I'm so happy they're partners now! It's going to be cool with them riding the old west together!!! Lol
I didn't think it was too violent, that's what life was like in the old west!!! Everybody had a gun & with outlaws it was kill or be killed!!!
PLEASE keep writing more!!! This is cool & a breath of fresh air from the usual that's on here!!!
Oh & I'm putting you into my author favorites!
Author's responseOh my gosh what an honor!! (no sarcasm. really. I actually mean it :D) I'm so glad you like it :) Thanks for reading and I definitely will!
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