(#) xXchickenwithatacoXx 2013-02-19This is great already, Cupcake. :'3 Haha the only thing is you should add some Fria in it. ;D Ahahaha just kidding. But I really do love it.
Author's response:) thank you Kitty!
Can't wait for my oneshot btw,it'll be cool!
(#) BeccaIsNotOnFire 2013-02-19A brother...called Daniel...Dan...Danisnotonfire...my baby XD
Update soon xxx
Author's responseOH MY GOD IF MY BROTHER WAS SECRETLY DANISNOTONFIRE THAT'D BE SO COOL!
yeah,I'm thinking of updating tonight..
I have a few things in my mind right now..
...hmm...i'll think about it
(#) BeccaIsNotOnFire 2013-02-19If Dan Howell was your brother...It still be fucking him XD
Aw you ok Sadie? :/ You can email me if you want to talk about anything? xxx
Author's responseI'm fine Becca!
no need to worry!
but I'll have your email for future needing.
my new one is Sadiemychem@gmail.com
(#) Terrehbau5 2013-03-16I'm about to give you some CC so, prep up.
You need to be really mindful of your spacing. Spaces come after periods and comas. sentences don't look like this.because that's like,really hard to read.
You need to be more descriptive in your writing.
And this goes without reading any other chapter, but this character is a Mary Sue.
Not trying to be rude. Just letting you know.
Also, you pretty much copied that whole "About 3 things i was absolutely positive. First, Edward was a vampire. Second, there was a part of him, and i didnt know how dominant that part might be, that thirsted for my blood. And third, i was unconditionally and irrevocably in love with him" thing from Twilight. Changing the name from Edward to Gerard and paraphrasing is still plagiarism, and to be honest, I'm not about to read a fic that mimics Twilight.
- Hey, hey Terrehbau5
Can you not?
Sorry but that's pushing CC and going into rude.
You didn't read the full thing, which means you don't know if she put in a huge ass plot twist.
I'm sorry, and I accept that everyone has an opinion.
But you should read the full fic before you add in a CC; okay?
Cause saying someone is just ripping shit off and critizing their work does hurt (trust me)
I'm not a bitch, but I'm getting sick of people reading one chapter, hearing one song, hearing one riff and saying "YOU.AREN'T.DOING.GOOD"
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