When the chips are down, few people can actually swing the bat. Naota has proven he could swing it once. With the unusual help of Eri Ninamori he may just be able to do it again.
- It was pretty good. I think the start was a little off, with Naoto saying swinging the bat was an art form, then going on to say how anyone could do it if they wanted to with a little effort. That's a contradiction - art is by definition something most people can never attain, no matter how they work at it.
After that, it settles down and goes pretty well. A little slow perhaps for some folk, but not bad. I like the mood the writing creates.
(#) jidfurikuri 2007-03-09 04:46:50 PMThis is really good...good adaptation of the characters and such....^.^
made me happy!!! http://www.flclw.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=2005&start=0
go there!!! i didn't write it...but it's really good and kinda remidned me of your fan-fic....just a little....
but this just like completely made my day!!!