- Nice reward system. I take it that each girl will be hand-picked by Fawkes and they will all be part of the punishment of Fleur?
Will Harry end up becoming the first, and only male Veela to help keep the society thriving?
Author's responseYes to the first part, no to the second. I think the "Male Veela" cliché is overdone and I plan to avoid it.
Of course, it's possible I might stumble into other clichés. Most of my clichés aren't original.
(#) wolfgang108 2013-05-27Welcome back. Great hook, can't wait to see where you take this. Like dennisud asked, please don't make the number of girls into some thing overly ridiculous. Some recent stories have a cast of hundreds or some close to a thousand. Well it is obvious that Harry has stamina and or youthful exuberance. Is the story a "bond" story or one where he has multiple "relationships" of varying degrees. Who are potential interests ? Is it limited to other students or is any female character a potential Potter bed mate? Thanks for sharing
Author's responseThe cast won't be nearly that large, and there will be relationships of varying degrees. And other female characters are not off-limits.
Thank you for your review!
(#) Darkmark66 2013-06-04This was excellent, such a nice twist regarding Fawkes and I always like insight into the Veela.
It is a pity there will be others as it would be better with just Fawkes and Fleur, too many ladies tends to get too much.
Hermione involved was a disapointment as she always is it would have been a refeshing change to be without her and I never liked how nasty Hermione was to Fleur in the 6th book.
That said I hope there is more and I may never think of Fawkes the same way again.
- I'm definitely looking forward to more of this and to seeing how matters work out. I suspect that Hermione will be one of the next to see what Harry's learned. It should make for interesting times in the Castle, especially if Albus takes forever to catch on.
Author's responseTrue that is. Will write more whenever I get the chance.
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