Categories > Original > Romance > Tester


by sickly_ill 2 Reviews

I look down at the ground and feel tears sting my eyes.

Category: Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Warnings: [!!] [V] - Published: 2013/07/28 - Updated: 2013/07/28 - 2435 words


  • Tester

    (#) Poppana 2013-07-28 06:33:44 AM

    Wooooo this is awesome! Handsome gentlemen brawling! That's like my favorite thing!

    So I'm guessing this isn't the chapter following the first one? :D Doesn't matter, I like this! Adrian is a bit of a poopoo-head, isn't he? I love all this drama so much.

    Saw some typos, but no big deal. I haven't really much else to say :D Very good chapter.

    By the way, what you responded to my review in the beginning chapter, I feel like on this site, original stories don't really get much credit. And there's nothing wrong with sticking to the fandom part of Ficwad, but I think people are really missing out when they don't give the original section a chance...

    Author's response

    I know. Gotta love a good fight :P

    Um, no. lol I'm working on that one. And yes. He's a hot headed cholo. Like most of em are.

    I know. I don't have autocorrect on this thing.

    And no, they don't. But I do read some of them because they're actually good. But some can be really, not well written.


  • Tester

    (#) MCR-99 2013-07-28 10:31:23 AM

    ISS? I'm a little.. confused?

    Eh, whatever. I love this story.

    I might do this with two of my OC's. They're kind of an item.

    Update soon!! XO Sadie

    Author's response

    Yeah, the order is kinda wrong with the "chapters" in here. But thank you.


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