The fallout continues from last chapter. Fasten your safety belts!
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-08-05 09:31:07 PMNice chapter title. My root beer came up into my nose when I saw it...very uncomfortable. Luckily, my keyboard escaped further harm (a syrup incident last year...don't ask).
The prisoner exchange/memory for Luna exchange can't possibly go as planned. We'll just have to see who gets the short end of the straw. Looking forward to Snape's inevitable death, even though it probably won't happen in the next chapter.
Congrats on your exam. I just now looked back and read your A/N.
One last thing I liked: Susan's fight with the gargoyles. Hopefully a confidence booster for her.
See ya (so to speak) next chapter.
Author's responseThanks for the compliments. Sorry about the root beer up the nose, glad it didn't cost you a keyboard. Jim
- Chapter title becomes a bit squicky with Lucius' punishment revealed. Ick.
Author's responseI actually had a version where the joke is less implied and Peter actually taunted Lucius by saying he was going to make sure to eat lots of corn this week so Lucius wouldn't miss out on his nutrition. I was told it was a little over the top, so I went for the subtlety. Jim
(#) CootiePatootie 2006-08-06 05:49:45 AMExcellent. Really really excellent. It's about time Snivellus got his due.
What happened with Susan??? I must know...it is not fair to leave us with this you know!
Great update. Can't wait for more.
Author's responseFirst - let me say great screenname! Some would say Snivellus getting his just desserts is way overdue.
As for Susan, well what is a story with out a little cliffhanger or some unanswered questions? I wouldn't kill her would I? It's not like people die randomly and without any prior notice in my story is it? Oh wait, nevermind. Err, next update in 2 weeks... Jim
- Very nicely done. It's obvious you've put a great amount of effort into the story, even when taking that blasted Cisco test. I applaud you for sitting through it, by the way. No idea how it is now, but it was brutal when I had to take it. Granted I failed, but hey, whatever.
Author's responseGlad you liked it. The test was pretty bad, but I was just doing it to renew my CCNP. I don't know if I know enough to challenge the lab practical part of becoming a CCIE. I do have 18 well now only 17 months to decide.
Glad you enjoy the story. Try my other one if you haven't already. I think you will like it.
- OUTSTANDING STORY SO FAR!!!! this story rocks and I so can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter, do keep up the outstanding work and update soon:):):):)
Author's responseThanks. Also try my other story. I think you will enjoy it as well. --Jim