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Shower
(#) HakuRules1424 2006-09-18
that was.....unexpected lol i mean well no never mind it was really good i find it nice to read really good short ones instead of those 7,000 word ones ya know well good job you should write a second chapter byeAuthor's response
Thanks...I think. :/
Your review is rather backhanded, indecisive and greatly lacking in punctuation. If you liked the story but certain elements didn't work for you, it's not going to make me slit my wrists to hear it.Shower
(#) Hatsumi_Narita 2006-09-20
eww....write stories about shikamaru and ino not with choji!!!Author's response
Eww read the warnings you twit!Shower
(#) alanahikarichan 2006-11-19
XD That was delicious. Mmm.
And hurrah! Punches the air I love it when writers don't leave out Chouji. Many kudos for you.Shower
(#) Lourdes 2007-02-03
Wow, short but sweet&spicey. I love Shikamaru and I think Ino and he would be a very interesting pairing. I would totally not object if you wanted to write more romance stories involving the two, and maybe through in some more spice. (Choji is optional, though, and it need not be a continuation of this particular story.) That's my suggestion. Hope it helps.
Thanks for the great read!
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