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All The Things That You Don't Know

by Surgery 5 Reviews

She was there every show they played, no matter how big or small. Pete found himself infatuated with her, but knew he never had a shot. Besides the fact that he knew what she thought of him, she wa...

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: G - Genres: Angst, Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2006/08/09 - Updated: 2006/08/10 - 872 words - Complete

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  • All The Things That You Don't Know

    (#) xxooChrista 2006-08-09 10:50:50 PM

    This is good stuff here. Pete and his inner dialogue are never right, are they?
  • All The Things That You Don't Know

    (#) Mikeysgirl 2007-06-14 07:20:44 PM

    you should add at least one more chapter from her point of veiw. but other then that this fan fic was amazing, some of them that you read are miss-spelled and unorginised but this one made you feel for the charecter which is hard to do knowing that the person your reading or writing about is a real human being and you don't really know them. i've read fan fics with 50 chapters that don't give as much depth as your one chapter. so thank you for posting this you have made me night.

    Author's response

    Thank you for your review. That made me feel really good. & While it isn't exactly the same, there is a follow up story to this one, showing things from her point of view. It's called 'Be My Escape', and I'd love to know what you think of it.
  • All The Things That You Don't Know

    (#) missfiona 2007-06-15 04:00:31 PM

    I really enjoyed this - you should continue!
  • All The Things That You Don't Know

    (#) miss_pretty 2007-06-15 10:28:23 PM

    that was sweet! pls go on!
  • All The Things That You Don't Know

    (#) fob4ever 2007-06-17 12:07:14 AM

    this is so sweet. i want you to keep it going, but it's also so good with that ending. so do what you want. it'll be amazing either way :)

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