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• Stray

  (#) rhynim 2006-08-17

  stray=slythern, defently not hufflepuffle.... posibley raven claw. ok, defently got some raven claw tendinceys, i mean shizit, he daduced snape was a potions master from greasy hair, but it'll be intersting to see what stray turns into, and cant snape AND luchis figer out the've b een mistreated by there cloths, how they act and such, i mean in the original story i can understand hagrid not understanding, he is a bit daft, but luch and snape, there cleaver and smart people, ii'll give u that snape didn't like thjem and all but lucy should have been able 2 notice.

• Stray

  (#) Sylvanestra 2006-08-17

  Ravenclaw would be good..he doesn't have the ruthless nature for Slytherin. Hufflepuff wouldn't suit him either..too much like his home life.

• Stray

  (#) Pillsy 2006-08-18

  Good story. Original, but with a few grammar and spelling errors. I would gladly like to offer you my services as beta-reader, please contact me with your response.
  
  As to which house Stray should be placed in, I would have to say that Slytherin would be too predictable with the demonic properties he posesses. I agree with your friend in that he seems more of a Hufflepuff than anything else.
  
  Pillsy

• Stray

  (#) selenepotter 2006-08-19

  hufflepuff!

• Stray

  (#) fluofontis 2006-08-21

  i actually think that they both should be hufflepuffs, or harry should be a hufflepuff and stray a slytherin. unless you plan a happy lets all be friends with other houses things, it would be disastorous to have them in gryff and slyth, but it is your story so whatever. i like the hufflepuff idea though.

• Stray

  (#) BigProof4eva 2006-08-31

  Great story, for Stray I think Hufflepuff would suit him, I'd be different, a main character in that house, he has the loyalty of a Hufflepuff, and he seems to small and girly to be a Slytherin :P
  
  Update soon!

• Stray

  (#) mikek 2006-09-15

  Giving Stray to the malfolys and then putting him with the durselys made no sense. The rest of story is pretty average.

• Stray

  (#) wildcard 2006-10-18

  With the way you portrayed both you characters they seem to be highly loyal to each other above all else so it would seem that they would both fit quite nicely into hufflepuff.

• Stray

  (#) BigProof4eva 2007-02-19

  Please update soon. I think that Ravenclaw would sute Stray, but it would be good to see him in Slytherin as it would give him more of a challange due to his personality.

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