Delilah gives up on Julius asking her out. One shot, poetry.
(#) Trinda 2006-08-23 12:39:21 PM
It almost breaks my heart that they're not getting together, though I can see the good points Delilah brought up.
Loved the poem, you write it? If so you're a really good poet ^.^
Yeah, I just thought of it. Yes, I did write the poem. Aww thanks. Poetry and writing always been my passion.
Thanks for reviewing!
(#) vaiwandil 2006-08-23 01:11:19 PM
wow, really good! You expressed so much ... and all in an oneshot, I'm deeply impressed!
and that at the end - it's just girls' logic: hoping, wanting, knowing one cant't have it ... my brother would never understand sth like that =)
(#) panda_1418 2006-08-23 01:35:42 PM
that's so cute ... but so sad! you're good at writin poetry
(#) cassandra 2006-08-23 01:38:12 PM
Your poetry is amazing. If I could write poems like that then my LA mark would go up a lot.