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I've Been Waiting

by darks00 4 Reviews

Delilah gives up on Julius asking her out. One shot, poetry.

Category: Delilah and Julius - Rating: G - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2006/08/23 - Updated: 2006/08/23 - 433 words - Complete

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  • I've Been Waiting

    (#) Trinda 2006-08-23 12:39:21 PM

    It almost breaks my heart that they're not getting together, though I can see the good points Delilah brought up.

    Loved the poem, you write it? If so you're a really good poet ^.^

    Author's response

    Yeah, I just thought of it. Yes, I did write the poem. Aww thanks. Poetry and writing always been my passion.
    Thanks for reviewing!

    xxDarkness' Kidxx
  • I've Been Waiting

    (#) vaiwandil 2006-08-23 01:11:19 PM

    wow, really good! You expressed so much ... and all in an oneshot, I'm deeply impressed!
    and that at the end - it's just girls' logic: hoping, wanting, knowing one cant't have it ... my brother would never understand sth like that =)
  • I've Been Waiting

    (#) panda_1418 2006-08-23 01:35:42 PM

    that's so cute ... but so sad! you're good at writin poetry

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