Sorry, folks, fanfiction.n is being evil, so I'm posting here for now.
(#) futuregypsy 2006-08-27 05:03:10 PMOh Yay!!! I'm so glad you've updated! And with a whopper of a chapter as well. Ed's to blame for Roy's condition? hmm. I can't wait to read how and why. Izumi's a little abusive, isn't she? Great chapter! I hope we'll get to read more relatively soon!
(#) Super_Narutard 2006-12-23 01:15:50 AMYOU ROCK!!!! put up your next chapter soon..
((WELL WTF ARE YOU WAITING FOR WRITE A LEMON!!)) XD
Author's responseAW! But you haven't read chapter 4 yet! >_< BAd you! You read ahead! (I'll have 4 up tomorrow and 6 is almost done!)
Thanks for commenting, and don't worry, the lemon shall be worht the wait! ;)
- Hey there - It's a shame that this stops here - although I noticed that the last time you updated with in August of 2006, It would be nice to think maybe your FMA muse will spark up again?
A wonderful five chapters - I did notice a few spelling mistakes here and there - but other than that I think you've managed this well - everyone's reactions seem pretty IC to me.