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9 ReviewsSorry, folks, fanfiction.n is being evil, so I'm posting here for now.
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(#) paige 2006-08-25 10:07:53 PM
I loved the House part. And when ed was going to turn roy's silverware into armstrong statues i burst out laughing.Author's response
:D Thanks! I'm glad I could make ya laugh! -
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(#) futuregypsy 2006-08-27 05:03:10 PM
Oh Yay!!! I'm so glad you've updated! And with a whopper of a chapter as well. Ed's to blame for Roy's condition? hmm. I can't wait to read how and why. Izumi's a little abusive, isn't she? Great chapter! I hope we'll get to read more relatively soon! -
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(#) The New Fullmetal Alchemist 2006-08-27 06:02:13 PM
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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(#) Lauren 2006-09-14 05:43:27 PM
OMG...so fucking good!!! You must continue...pleeeeeeeeeeeease!!! -
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(#) noneoyourfingbuisness 2006-11-20 06:29:04 PM
Edward...got a shot...in his butt...
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(#) Super_Narutard 2006-12-23 01:15:50 AM
YOU ROCK!!!! put up your next chapter soon..
((WELL WTF ARE YOU WAITING FOR WRITE A LEMON!!)) XDAuthor's response
AW! But you haven't read chapter 4 yet! >_< BAd you! You read ahead! (I'll have 4 up tomorrow and 6 is almost done!)
Thanks for commenting, and don't worry, the lemon shall be worht the wait! ;) -
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(#) red demon 2007-01-04 09:56:57 AM
lemons ehh? i like the sound of that. great story love it so far, i like the way you conceal most of the important information, not many people do that in the storys i read on fanfiction.net -
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(#) Shay 2007-07-15 12:11:38 PM
Awesome! Can't wait for more. puppy dog eyes Please? Will give cookies ^_~ awesome writing too. As a fellow author, I can't find much to complain about. ^_^ keep writing. -
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(#) Olliegami 2008-01-20 04:20:22 AM
Hey there - It's a shame that this stops here - although I noticed that the last time you updated with in August of 2006, It would be nice to think maybe your FMA muse will spark up again?
A wonderful five chapters - I did notice a few spelling mistakes here and there - but other than that I think you've managed this well - everyone's reactions seem pretty IC to me.