- Still enjoying the story. The fight seemed like it was missing something, but as you continue to write it will get better and do continue to write. It will be interesting to see the dynamic between the Harry and Bella develop. Best of luck continuing.
Author's responseThanks :) Missing what? I'm always willing to accept suggestions/criticism. :) It can only help :)
- Sorry I didn't review the last chapter, but my laptop's harddrive went kerblooey. The way you wrote out the action sequences was excellent, and the plot seems to be developing nicely. I am, of course, eagerly awaiting the moment when bellatrix and harry have to band together, as so far it has only been working against a common enemy for short periods of time.
Good job, I look forward to reading more.
Author's responseDon't worry about it :) Thanks for the review :D. I'm glad you like the way this has developed so far :) And you'll get your wish in the next chapter, methinks :D My betas pointed out that I can't have them avoid talking any longer. I won't promise as to what'll happen, since the two of them have a way of running away from me, but they WILL talk :)
(#) Anaknisatanas 2006-08-28Will Harry get his wand back in the next chapter? I liked that both of them were able to hold their own against the Order and Death Eaters. It was smart of Bellatrix to memory charm them and I'm glad that Harry didn't miraculously overpower Bellatrix as usually happens in most stories.
Author's responseThank you for your review :) I'm glad to hear that you like the fic :D Harry and Bella are equal in dueling, with Harry more speed/agility based while Bella uses power. That's the way I see it, anyway :)
About the wand... I don't know... maybe. :D Hehe
- I like this, I'm itching to see how they run into each other again. Definitely will be checking for the updates on this story.
Author's responseWell, I can't really say anything, but the story focuses on them, and the relationship between them, so they'll have to meet pretty soon. :)
I'm glad you enjoy the fic :)
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