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Chapter Three

by malko050987 4 Reviews

One has decided not to be used anymore. The other has no more use. Now, both sides want to catch them. But really, how do you catch two of the best duelists alive? Harry/Bellatrix, Post-seventh...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: G - Genres: Action/Adventure - Characters: Andromeda Tonks, Arthur Weasley, Bellatrix, Bill Weasley, Dumbledore, Fleur, Fred, George, Ginny, Harry, Hermione, Kingsley, Luna, Lupin, Molly Weasley, Ron, Snape, Tonks, Voldemort - Warnings: [?] [V] - Published: 2006/08/28 - Updated: 2006/08/28 - 3152 words

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  • I Want Out

    (#) JBern 2006-08-28 09:33:51 AM

    Still enjoying the story. The fight seemed like it was missing something, but as you continue to write it will get better and do continue to write. It will be interesting to see the dynamic between the Harry and Bella develop. Best of luck continuing.

    Jim

    Author's response

    Thanks :) Missing what? I'm always willing to accept suggestions/criticism. :) It can only help :)

    Chris
  • I Want Out

    (#) Chthonius 2006-08-28 11:44:27 AM

    Sorry I didn't review the last chapter, but my laptop's harddrive went kerblooey. The way you wrote out the action sequences was excellent, and the plot seems to be developing nicely. I am, of course, eagerly awaiting the moment when bellatrix and harry have to band together, as so far it has only been working against a common enemy for short periods of time.

    Good job, I look forward to reading more.

    Author's response

    Don't worry about it :) Thanks for the review :D. I'm glad you like the way this has developed so far :) And you'll get your wish in the next chapter, methinks :D My betas pointed out that I can't have them avoid talking any longer. I won't promise as to what'll happen, since the two of them have a way of running away from me, but they WILL talk :)

    Chris
  • I Want Out

    (#) Anaknisatanas 2006-08-28 04:54:34 PM

    Will Harry get his wand back in the next chapter? I liked that both of them were able to hold their own against the Order and Death Eaters. It was smart of Bellatrix to memory charm them and I'm glad that Harry didn't miraculously overpower Bellatrix as usually happens in most stories.

    Author's response

    Thank you for your review :) I'm glad to hear that you like the fic :D Harry and Bella are equal in dueling, with Harry more speed/agility based while Bella uses power. That's the way I see it, anyway :)

    About the wand... I don't know... maybe. :D Hehe

    Chris
  • I Want Out

    (#) LabRat 2006-08-30 12:40:45 AM

    I like this, I'm itching to see how they run into each other again. Definitely will be checking for the updates on this story.

    Author's response

    Well, I can't really say anything, but the story focuses on them, and the relationship between them, so they'll have to meet pretty soon. :)

    I'm glad you enjoy the fic :)

    Chris

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