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All for One
(#) firelord 2006-09-10
i love this story even if i am only rereading it please update agin a.s.a.p.All for One
(#) cdog21 2006-09-13
Alright Ill bite. You've gotten me interested so I hope the next chapter comes out soon. But one thing I was curious about wouldn't Kurenai and Anko be closer to Iruka's or Kakashi's age.All for One
(#) JoeFenton 2006-10-11
onee/nee - older sister
onii/nii - older brother
imouto - younger sister
otouto - younger brother
Most of your -nee- suffixes need to be changed to -nii- to avoid strange looks from people who know the difference. :)
Otherwise, doing pretty good. It's sort of a super!Naurto story, but at least he's coming by it honestly.All for One
(#) Kakashi__Eat__Me 2006-10-19
dude this is like sooo cool...you gotta update this im begging u...All for One
(#) Rob15 2006-11-18
This is definitely a new turn from the regular fan fics I've read and I can say I couldn't have thought of such a great change. I like how you've made naruto's life a bit kinder than his real life in the actual show, and I can't wait to see what happens next. He also seems to have a chance to be coazy with quite a few ladies, wink wink, lol. But if he does end up with a hyuuga please make it hinata, thats my favorite pair, and also I don't like hinabi. But its your story so far be it for me to force any ideas on you. Way to go so far and I'll be checking for updates!!All for One
(#) Rob15 2006-11-18
Oh I forgot to add after looking at your account info that since you don't like NaruHina unless its really good, why not take up the challege to make a good one? Just an idea so like I said before, far be it for me to force any ideas on you. I'll be watching for updates.All for One
(#) ronintoturi 2007-03-06
it has the beginning of a great story. can't wait to see what you do with it
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