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Part Three - Aftermath

by Misk 1 Reviews

Maes and Roy must deal with the fallout from last evening, and Gracia's final decision must be made.

Category: Full Metal Alchemist - Rating: G - Genres: Angst - Characters: Gracia Hughes, Maes Hughes, Roy Mustang - Published: 2006/09/23 - Updated: 2006/09/23 - 3930 words


  • The Ally

    (#) Roaming_Fool 2006-09-25 06:30:47 PM

    Beautiful. One of my favorite things about this story is that the characterizations are so consistent. Gracia is a housewife, but she's not a dumb, blonde, baby-making machine. Hughes isn't a den mother and Mustang is suffering from PTSD, but is still -himself- and not Mr. Emo.

    This story is a shining example of what an instinctive writer can do. There were some grammar nitpicks, but not enough to detract from my overall enjoyment of the story. I've added "The Ally" to my favorites list.

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