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Irresistible Force

by GenocideHeart 7 Reviews

Upon finding an unusual gem in an old antiques shop, Keitaro arrives at the Hinata Inn with some... noticeable changes... to his person. What changes? Let's just say, he's not easily pushed around....

Category: Love Hina - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Action/Adventure, Crossover, Humor - Characters:  - Warnings: [!] [?] - Published: 2006/10/02 - Updated: 2006/10/02 - 5304 words

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  • Irresistible Force

    (#) drkman 2006-10-15 03:24:36 PM

    Please continue this story. I have to say it is extremely good and i would like to see what happens next
  • Irresistible Force

    (#) yenommp 2006-11-02 11:31:20 PM

    Wonderful Story, now is it going to get a bit off lemon added to as it goes along, like your Naruto fic? I do hope so as you do a wonderful job at it.

    Anyway I hope you update this fic sometime soon it has alot of potential, and there have been so few great continued Love Hina lately.

    Author's response

    Eh, no plans for lemony bits. Lime and fabservice, yes. Flat out lemon, not for now. Thanks for reviewing.
  • Irresistible Force

    (#) Triggerbox 2007-01-04 01:09:34 AM

    Brilliant. I can honestly say I have never read or even thought of a fic with these elements in it. It is a great idea and I hope you continue it.
  • Irresistible Force

    (#) dogbertcarroll 2007-01-11 08:30:21 AM

    Although I have a hard time believing
    Naru could mistake the Juggernaut for
    anything but a massive wall of flesh, I
    really liked the way it turned out.

    Author's response

    Keep in mind Keitaro was submerged underwater to his neck, and Naru was glasses-less. She dipped her hand underwater to feel his chest up, and the steam prevented her from seeing the size difference between him and Kitsune.
  • Irresistible Force

    (#) Tian87 2007-10-08 10:35:45 AM

    i like how you had the story tun out it was good. PLEASE contintue i want to read more!!
  • Irresistible Force

    (#) cycla568 2007-10-30 11:13:55 AM

    I realy enjoyed reading this story. and hope that you put a new chapter out soon. As I enjoyed reading this one very much.

    Though I think you are a bit to harsh about Naru (Though I like a good story that lets her get what is comeing to her for her treatment of Keitaro).
  • Irresistible Force

    (#) Saric 2008-06-01 01:12:00 AM

    this story makes for an excellent read. Hope you add a chapter to this, instead of keeping it as the single chapter it is.

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