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Chapter 2 - Backtracks and a Backlash

by whatkatydid 4 Reviews

get inside their heads....

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: G - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Warnings: [!!!] - Published: 2006/10/04 - Updated: 2006/10/04 - 1395 words

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  • This Isn't What You Wanted.

    (#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-03 03:28:37 PM

    How, for all the plonk in plonkersville, can anyone read this and NOT LEAVE A GODDAMN REVIEW?! Katy, I didn´t know I had this kind of feelings in me. This is just sheer beauty. On my computer screen. (Back with a rating point next week.)
  • This Isn't What You Wanted.

    (#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-29 05:06:29 PM

    yes, i am kicking myself for not finishing what i started with this one.

    i remember reading this and being like "whoa. very impressive", but my mind is far from linear and we both know how hard it is to keep up with FicWad.

    anyway, enough of the excuses...

    you put a lot of information into this one chapter…

    being that it gave the whole history of their relationship together. describing her as "black and white" but also describing pete as having "shown her the gray"...i love it.

    and then describing their relationship from Patricks point of view, and his amount of jealousy/admiration for the couple was pretty amazing.

    so, i'm going to continue on this adventure. thanks for taking my mind off of life for a while...

    Author's response

    Thanks for the faith. Needed it. Miss you?
  • This Isn't What You Wanted.

    (#) El_Zorro 2007-01-11 09:25:26 AM

    i don't know why i should be scared??
    but this is so great. its kinda moving and the way you wrote the emotional stuff is pretty good
  • This Isn't What You Wanted.

    (#) xp0lkad0tx 2007-02-02 02:40:49 AM

    make sure he arrested her heart.

    i liked that line alot. i love this story!

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