get inside their heads....
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-03 03:28:37 PMHow, for all the plonk in plonkersville, can anyone read this and NOT LEAVE A GODDAMN REVIEW?! Katy, I didn´t know I had this kind of feelings in me. This is just sheer beauty. On my computer screen. (Back with a rating point next week.)
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-29 05:06:29 PMyes, i am kicking myself for not finishing what i started with this one.
i remember reading this and being like "whoa. very impressive", but my mind is far from linear and we both know how hard it is to keep up with FicWad.
anyway, enough of the excuses...
you put a lot of information into this one chapter…
being that it gave the whole history of their relationship together. describing her as "black and white" but also describing pete as having "shown her the gray"...i love it.
and then describing their relationship from Patricks point of view, and his amount of jealousy/admiration for the couple was pretty amazing.
so, i'm going to continue on this adventure. thanks for taking my mind off of life for a while...
Author's responseThanks for the faith. Needed it. Miss you?