- I really liked it. It was good the way you get both perspectives, it's interesting to know whats going on in both their heads! Cant wait til the feelings come out! X
Author's responseyea, we're working our way there slowly. a lot of the story is going to be them sorting through their own feelings and coming to terms with them. Not necessarily together though.
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-10-18 08:00:59 AM"the thumping of his heart that not so strangely resembled a bass line" wow. how appropriate.
i sit at a computer for hours trying to write lines like that. i'm thoroughly jealous and exceedingly captivated.
Author's responsethanks so much. that means a lot to both getup_n_go and myself. :) we spend a lotta time and energy on getting across the right emotions when we write our stuff. We're gonna update soon but we've both had real life get in the way for right now.