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Russet

by S_J_Smith 1 Reviews

Coming home, Winry finds someone unexpected at the house.

Category: Full Metal Alchemist - Rating: G - Genres: Drama - Characters: Winry Rockbell - Published: 2006/10/12 - Updated: 2006/10/12 - 1045 words - Complete

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  • Russet

    (#) AnnePackrat 2006-10-12 08:43:11 PM

    Nice description here. Only thing I'd improve would be to give a better idea of how much time has passed. I have trouble picturing how old Winry is here. 16? 20? Just a suggestion though. And dammit, why'd you have to have Den gone? I love Den!

    Something tells me that one of those kittens is coming home with Al though.

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