it's about to be a...what? Girl fight! (I'm sorry for quoting shitty music. but it is almost 4 in the morning. My brain isn't functioning correctly)
- I'm loving this story so far. You got me hooked with the therapy session at the beginning, and now this chapter is drama filled. Oh how I love drama...in fiction that is.
Author's responsewell thank you for loving it.
i feel like i cheated with the first chapter because it was so descriptive and the second just kinda, well, its all dialog. but thank your for loving the drama. i'll keep it coming
(#) killxsmile 2006-11-02crazy jealous boyfriend is gone. this is leaving an opening for a certain bassist to step in...
Author's responsethat it does. but it also leaves an opening for resentment, hatred, and mean words.
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-02-24This chapter was so brilliant! (I just had to come by and review.) The fight was written so well. Usualy they're so hard to follow and it's most of the time over something stupid, but you made me really believe it! I wanted to punch Jane in the face myself. :)
Author's responsea new reader? yay! alright, so the fight was a little over-dramatic for my taste, but i wrote that a while ago and it's just something i felt i needed to add. thanks for appreciating it though.
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