Jay's day starts out fine but takes a nosedive when he recieves the worst news possible. But he has to keep it together for his team. Can he do it alone? Okay this is just a random one-shot I had f...
(#) RainPaw 2006-10-16 07:35:55 PM
That was soooooo great! I'm not sure if anyone relises but like no one writes good songfics for Coot on this site, so it was nise to finally read one, for you first one it was amazing!
That was really truly beautiful. Amazing song choce to.
(#) greektitan 2006-10-16 08:20:17 PM
(#) greektitan 2006-10-16 08:22:34 PM
Omg sry for the OOOo but poor old jay his parents are dead,how will theresa meat them,i hope he doesnt die!!Updata soon
(#) hachoo 2006-10-16 11:22:15 PM
awww... that's sad and sweet! good story!
(#) Loretta 2006-10-17 06:49:58 AM
Awwww, that was cute, but sad. I really liked it! Can't wait for the A/A one.
(#) iheartyou07 2006-10-17 09:12:32 AM
awwww, that was sooo sad! Very well written! I've got like tears in my eyes, poor Jay. Really cute ending though. Loved it! Adding to favorites once I get logged in! Keep up the awesome work!
(btw, did you get my PM?)
(#) greektitan 2006-10-17 01:50:53 PM
Jay had a bad day
His parants went away
he is now so sad
theresa feel's bad
jay had a bad day
i dont know what to say
great story over all
Escpecially,the sad call
jay had a bad day..
NICE i made a new song,lol great story!
..jay had a bad day!
very kool, so sad yet so good! :`)awsum!
(#) K.H.M. 2006-10-22 05:07:42 PM
well i thought the beginning was good but it started to get kinda corney near the end. And it could be longer