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Short exerpt from Painting of a Pomegranate

this is just a bit from a story i'm going to write called Painting of a Pomegranate. pretty much meant for herk444, cuz no one else will understand. but basically the story's about a painter who ...

Category: Fantasy - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst, Fantasy - Characters:  - Published: 2006/10/20 - Updated: 2006/10/20 - 1848 words

Reviews

• Short exerpt from Painting of a Pomegranate

  (#) herk444 2006-10-20 11:55:21 AM

  Woah. That was scarey. Like, really scarey.
  
  Very well written however. The only problem that I could find were unclear brakes inbetween the perspectives of the person whom is with Ewen and the mother and daughter. Otherwise, kudos.
  
  love!
  
  herkie

  Author's response

  yah, i fixed it now. i have no idea how to work that italics thing. i mean, i tried it, but then the whole thing was slanted....i didn't think it would be scary....okay, yes, there are suicidal thoughts....and vampires.....okay, i suppose it could scare some people. anyhowz, thanks for the review, herkie. maybe i'll start writing the actual story ^^
  
  love ya back,
  kettles

• Short exerpt from Painting of a Pomegranate

  (#) herk444 2006-11-29 11:50:50 AM

  Sorry, had to review again. I can't get over how fabulous this is.
  
  --herkie

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