- sweet, another wonderful chapter. Nice to see Snape (civil?) yes well, whatever it was, it was nice.
so the second task, will Harry be saving anyone? I hope you include Gabby a bit more in this fic. People always leave her out ... alas, that i ur decision...
congrats and update soon.
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-11-01I actually burst out laughing when you described Krum's date. He does seem to have a bit of a fixation, doesn't he?
I especially liked Harry's conversation with Karkaroff and Maxime, but his reaction to Rita Skeeter really took the cake this time.
Looking forward to more.
(#) Meteoricshipyards 2006-11-01I suppose they could still feed her to Neville's toad in the future. Nice to see Luna having other friends.
One typo "her shies had been a bit tight" Might as well change that to "shoes" before ficalley kicks it back to you.
Good chapter. Thanks for writing it.
(#) DavidMPotter 2006-11-01Another wonderful chapter. I loved the catching of Rita Skeeter. I look forward to her reaction and Can't wait until you give us more details of their sex life. The hint of Parteltoung being a gift in producing orgasms and the mention of multiple in this chapter is a teaser. Go ahead an up the rating to NC-17 and go for it.
- Typo: "...her shies had been a bit tight..." shies -> shoes
Nice chapter. Harry's rather pushing it a bit with revealing details about the other schools, I'll be curious to see if it has any impact.
Thanks for sharing this with us.
Author's responseNo, Harry is just being a bit snarky.
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