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Snape Explains the Past
17 ReviewsWhen would be the best point in time for an over-powered Harry to return to his past? Right before the First Task! In this chapter, Snape tries to explain the motivations of Grindelwald and Volde...
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(#) kellypassion 2006-11-04 05:42:56 AM
it is about time that they start standing up to Malfoy. So is harry going to be envolved with more then one girl?Author's response
I set it up so he could get close to Luna, but they don't get that close.
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(#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-11-04 07:22:17 AM
The Bern perspective adds an interesting twist to things. I like that you always create a gray area of some sort. You're better at justifying Voldemort's position (not to a level where I could support him, but you get the idea) than almost any other author I've read. -
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(#) Skoell 2006-11-04 07:32:33 AM
it's unfair that i never get to rate this story because it's already so good rated.....
great story!!!!! -
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(#) Jimm 2006-11-04 07:38:41 AM
It's nice to see some more background and thought behind the bad guys than just crazy & power hungry. Good chapter, thanks for sharing it with us. -
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(#) Bill 2006-11-04 07:45:25 AM
Hello.
It's ben a long time without review from me, (( sorry )) But I still like your story's.
Today a new chapter was on - and it saved the day - but now it's read and it take time to the next chapter be up -I'm afraid - it's going to be "empty-time".
Well done is what I se others write - well - I secons that too.
Loking forward to next chapter and if it's a poll for if Snape accept Harrys ofer - well I think you put him to accept it, but I for ome can see him not to - and die.
As it's a new timeline - things can be solvd it different ways, for others as well as for Harry.
It was fun that Harry told about the other schools without to say how he knew of them. GOOD.
And if you put in some Draco attack against Harry or Luna or Hermione, And Harry do some respond to it. with respond I think of "beyond auror" level of magic, in some way. (evil mee) -Smiling-
Kep on doing the good writing.
In chapter VII:
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Mcgonagall's ==> McGonagall's ; right ?
Told you before I NEAD to do some beta for you.
LOL - just a way to get the storys fast.
:-)
Hope this finds you in god life
and having a god time
Best regards
bill
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(#) BenRG 2006-11-04 07:54:33 AM
I've always found your theories about the future relations between magical and muggle worlds interesting. I also find it interesting that you have tried to create a 'moderate' pure-blood supremicist movement that believes that 'sit and wait' would inevitably win victory over the impatienat and fundamentally self-destructive Muggles. If you are ever interested, you should write a future story about when magic and technology become harder to distinguish and how the human race was finally united.
That aside, this story appears to be slowing down at the moment, but I feel that, when the tasks resume, things will get interesting. Please do continue.
BenRG's Rating: 7/10 -
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(#) hilarydilarydoc 2006-11-04 07:58:38 AM
A very thoughtful and well plotted time travel!Harry story. I'm really looking forward to reading more as you develop your ideas, so please write more soon! -
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(#) DavidMPotter 2006-11-04 11:37:36 AM
Another brillant chapter. I loved that Draco was put in his place. -
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(#) jabarber69 2006-11-04 12:28:47 PM
Hey you got one hell of an interesting ideal going about that benn character and his pamphlets! and for a girl that didnt want to go to fast she sure has gotten alot of orgasms and given harry some too! but hey I'm not complaining, cause my fav couple is harry/mione! and lots of sex is great too!