Categories > Celebrities > Fall Out Boy > Best Thing that You Never Had
Maybe things would start to look up for good now...
4 ReviewsAmy goes on a date with Chris and a band starts to form...
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Best Thing that You Never Had
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-09 11:05:05 AM
YIPPY SKIPPY! UPDATE... Ok, I need to read it first maybe... ;) Be right back with comments. -
Best Thing that You Never Had
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-09 11:14:38 AM
You know I dig "Big Dreams..." but seriously, girl, you´ve really improved. That´s a kick-ass chapter. The "Hey Chris!" comment on the phone made me chuckle. Yes, it is a classic. You´ve got some great conversation going on here, paired with cute Patrick moments and the Andy-starts-a-new-life... ah, mission. I´m loving it. You´re getting my next to last rating point. :)Author's response
thanks! yeah... big dreams was my first and i got really lazy when i was writing it. i'm trying to get better! i might update on that one sometime in the future, but who knows! thanks for the review, like always! -
Best Thing that You Never Had
(#) imogen993 2006-11-09 11:47:27 AM
I actually love this story. Like, If it was possible to marry a story, I would marry this one. =] Like yeah. The 'Hey chris' this was a good bit. Liked it. x] And the previous chapters with Evie made me laugh so much. Even though the amount of times that you mentioned her being hot made the narrator sound like a lesbian. Lmao. I love this story. =] - - IzzyAuthor's response
not a lesbian... more like a smart ass. annd i'm really glad you love this story and of course it will marry you (if it could)! -
Best Thing that You Never Had
(#) moocow 2006-11-09 02:09:45 PM
hey.
i am not a whore.Author's response
no no i know! amy is just a little jealous.