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Life in USA wasn't that perfect

by Pump_Up 2 Reviews

Getting back home, Pierre finds out he received a phone call from his girlfriend and he phones her back wanting bad just to hear her voice again. But, once he talks to her, he may find out that lif...

Category: Simple Plan - Rating: G - Genres: Drama - Characters: Pierre Bouvier - Published: 2006/11/14 - Updated: 2006/11/14 - 1515 words

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  • Alone In The Dark

    (#) XEMOXGURLX 2006-11-18 12:45:55 AM

    I LOVE IT! Its really good and that girl Ashley I think ill beat her up! LOL and that was kinda sad but i still like it alot! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

    Author's response

    Thanks a lot for reviewing. I'm kinda out of time this week and I'm having a lot of problems here in my home, but I promise that I'll try to update it as fast as I can. Maybe you'll have a new chapter this week.
  • Alone In The Dark

    (#) catlover070904 2008-06-01 05:02:25 PM

    The story, the plot, all great. I love the idea very much but the English is just so bad!. I am sorry, really but it looks like English is not your first language at all. I am not giving up on the story, but it is just so hard to read at certain points and also hard to understand. Do you have a beta? someone who does know English who could read over your chapter and tell you where you got it wrong and help you out?

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