Getting back home, Pierre finds out he received a phone call from his girlfriend and he phones her back wanting bad just to hear her voice again. But, once he talks to her, he may find out that lif...
(#) XEMOXGURLX 2006-11-18 12:45:55 AMI LOVE IT! Its really good and that girl Ashley I think ill beat her up! LOL and that was kinda sad but i still like it alot! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Author's responseThanks a lot for reviewing. I'm kinda out of time this week and I'm having a lot of problems here in my home, but I promise that I'll try to update it as fast as I can. Maybe you'll have a new chapter this week.
(#) catlover070904 2008-06-01 05:02:25 PMThe story, the plot, all great. I love the idea very much but the English is just so bad!. I am sorry, really but it looks like English is not your first language at all. I am not giving up on the story, but it is just so hard to read at certain points and also hard to understand. Do you have a beta? someone who does know English who could read over your chapter and tell you where you got it wrong and help you out?