The function of the TV is revealed.
(#) MusicxisxHearts 2006-11-14 01:30:51 PMWow. Simply wow. I absolutely love the way you put so much feeling into your writing. The way Pete acts makes it seem completely believeable.
Author's responseWell, THANK YOU for saying that. :) This one was really hard work for me... yeah...
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-14 03:49:55 PMthis is by far the most intriguing thing I’ve read on FicWad.
the suspense of the situation is so abundant. the way it the story flows slowly helps develop a descriptive ambiance and it builds the anticipation.
showing pete as he slowly loses his mind by letting his paranoia get the best of him leaves us wondering what his next option is. i'm actually finding myself trying to piece the information together and wonder what the next step is. now there is no TV to communicate with him, so whoever abducted him has to reveal their identity.
gah. i'm on the edge of my seat. and you aren’t going to update for like, three days just to keep me here. you are a sick fuck. but i love you for it.
Author's responseTru dat? ;) P.S.: I´m going to update soon. Or at least, I WANT to update soon... but I kinda put off some work for school that I need to catch up on. :I But I think I´ll probably (putting this as vaguely as I can) update this one before I put up the next Bass Files + PU chapters. DoJ... homework doing :(
- Holy Crap! I love how this story keeps the reader on the edge of their seat!!! I can't wait until the next update because I am slowly going crazy right along with Pete. What the hell is going on!?!? I love it.
Author's responseI´m glad you like this one because I really look up to your work. (I fell off the chair reading...) ;) I hope I can keep you interested in this story. (If not, I´ll just force you to read it because you´re in DoJ. ;) ) Hope YOU update soon!