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• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) moocow 2006-11-12

  i fucking love you
  i call dibs on first review
  fuck yeah
  let's have super ubber coolbeans babies

  Author's response

  I'm all about the super ubber coolbeans babies! Sounds like fun! Props to being the first reviewer!!!

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) moocow 2006-11-12

  that review made no sense whatso ever and i don't care.
  
  i just care about you updating.
  -cracks whip-
  NOW!

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-12

  YEAH! The new LOVELA story! And I´m the very first one to review. covers up Evie´s posts with her hands on the computer screen The VERY FIRST, I say! glares
  
  Ok, so the Grand-dame of Drama has returned with another piece of fiction that puts others to shame. Let me just point out a few things that should be mentioned (i.e. that you should be praised for):
  1) the seeding of the story (especially the opening paragraphs) -> We´re curious, we´re dying to know, you got us hooked.
  2) shedding light on the inner life of the characters -> We empathize and take your characters for real people with real lifes, thus real problems.
  3) calling Patrick a push-over. -> We like to laugh. ;)
  4) referring to a thesaurus in your summary. -> If you were to took up "addictive FOB fanfiction that is gripping beyond reasonable limits" you´d find a picture of LOVELA.
  
  You are the pioneer of the Division of Joy´s work so go ahead and lead the way, C. :)

  Author's response

  Thank you so so so much for this review. I was talking to Crystal last night about my anxieties about posting a new story due to the fact that I wasn't sure if it would live up to I Remember. I definitely feel more confident about this story now. You are a great ego booster!
  
  PS: Grand-dame of Drama...I like it :)

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-12

  P.S.: I was also gonna state my "AAAWWW! Those cute kids" but I´m convinced that Katy will comment on that anyway. ;)

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) whatkatydid 2006-11-12

  Gah!
  Firstly - Patrick. faints I love the fact she drives an Explorer - she should hang out with Shay, they could talk dirty.
  Secondly - Banter between the boys was great, I loved the "Rag on Patrick Day" line and the fact that he was pouting, folding his arms and swearing a lot. LOL.
  
  Thirdly - Alex is right...AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW the kids were adorable!! I Love Jackson - can I have him already? Oh, and Patrick, and the explorer.....and blue candy too, that sounded tasty.
  
  Did I mention I love you lately? I do. Seriously. I mean it.

  Author's response

  Allow me to faint right along side of you...deep sigh
  
  Thanks for the wonderful review. After that review, how could I not love you back...really.

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-13

  so let me clear your head of one of the worries you had: i love colettes character, and he story line is a good contrast against "I Remember". no worries there.
  
  i love how you jumped back and forth from what she's doing to what patrick is doing, and i must say i'm really excited to see a patrick story.

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-13

  you didn't honestly think i would leave a shitty short review like that, did you? my computer hit enter and submitted that.
  
  okay, so let me finish...
  
  the fact that your main character obviously has a heart of gold (working with challenged children, which is really original, by the way) shows that she's a selfless person, and makes her a memorable character. the fact that she has a skeleton in her closet (based on the first couple of lines) mean drama-rama, and i'm so there.
  
  introducing patrick (and the way the guys make fun of him, which made me laugh) gives the readers a sense of where he's at, and how he's feeling. i think describing patrick in a "funk" was pure genius, because we all go through that "i'm feeling older than i actually am" phase. or maybe it’s just me, either way i loved it.
  
  you have nothing to worry about with this one. it's a hit.

  Author's response

  Thanks for the great feedback. As I finished writng the chapter last night, I was starting to feel much better.
  
  Put your seatbelt on and allow for the ride of drama-rama to begin. Afterall, it is what I do best.

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