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Chapter 1

Harry is emancipated at 16, and now he wants revenge. This is a grey!Harry and grey!Ginny

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Action/Adventure, Romance - Characters: Dumbledore, Ginny, Harry, Kingsley, Molly Weasley, Moody, Petunia Dursley, Ron, Snape, Tonks, Vernon Dursley, Voldemort - Published: 2006/11/16 - Updated: 2006/11/16 - 4079 words

Reviews

• Kill the Magical World

  (#) Dragen 2006-11-18 09:46:53 AM

  What a great start to the story, I can't wait to see what Harry gets up to next.

• Kill the Magical World

  (#) DavidMPotter 2006-11-20 08:34:25 AM

  Great start! I love the grey harry fics. What happened to his aunt and uncle? Did Tonks remember the imperio?

• Kill the Magical World

  (#) Pixie 2007-02-10 04:44:33 PM

  With magic, Darke or otherwise, I would definitely make power and revenge top of my list. Then money.

• Kill the Magical World

  (#) mythic77 2007-06-23 09:13:24 PM

  The story line isn't bad, but the use of language, punctuation, and grammer is atrocious. It really distracts from enjoying the story, because I spend too much time trying to put the words into the correct order. The only excuse for the way words are used here is if English is your second language. These seem to be the kinds of mistakes that would be made by someone who grew up in a language with different grammatical rules of word placement/useage.

• Kill the Magical World

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2007-08-31 08:28:49 PM

  Outstanding. Looks like it might be a fun read.
  
  gunny

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