(#) sunfalling 2006-11-22I really liked the imagery of Ryou in the pool, enclosed in water while Yugi watched anxiously. I don't want to say this is OOC, but I haven't seen Ryou this depressed in the canon, so I expect you'll give us a plausable reason for his desire to "drown" in the next chapter when you develop the plot more.
Author's responseThank you for keeping an open mind about this fic! Yes, it'll become more apparent in later chapters. Once again, thanks for the open mind!
(#) Sandra-Dark 2006-11-27OMG CHRONIC PAIN! ^-^ love this fic gal glad its back up! I was hit with saddness that Ryou was drowning himself.. tears but very well done!
Author's responseMuwahaha YES Chronic Pain once again graces this world! Yeah, even though it only got so many reviews on ffn, it was on the favorites lists of a ton of people who emailed me wondering why the hell I took this and LAPAS down. They demanded that I leave them up for everyone to read because they were my best works. Do you remember LAPAS? Well, I'm gona tweak it a bit and repost.
(#) kitsunetears 2009-09-26I guess I'm a bit slow on the uptake but still felt like reviewing even if this never gets read.
I got a strong overall picture of Ryou's mental instability and Yugi's need nurture and protect him, but there weren't enough details complete the puzzle so to speak. It could be that I'm missing something obvious but did you ever give an explanation of how Ryou lives through his drowning episodes? That was really the only thing that caught me up. Either way I enjoyed reading and hope there will be continuation.
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