Categories > Anime/Manga > Yu-Gi-Oh! > Chronic Pain

Chronic Pain

by The_Wingless_Raven 9 Reviews

This follows two different stories of two different characters. Warning: Major angst. This is just the first chapter of many. Not sure how often I'll update though

Category: Yu-Gi-Oh! - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst - Characters: Marik Ishtar, Ryou Bakura, Yugi Mutou - Warnings: [?] - Published: 2006/11/20 - Updated: 2006/11/21 - 774 words

Reviews

  • Chronic Pain

    (#) BlackEgyptianKitten 2006-11-21 03:32:34 PM

    Awesome fic Raven. ^^

    Whoever sent you that other review was just stupid. >.<

    Great job! ^__^

    Author's response

    Once again...doesn't really say anything about the story...
  • Chronic Pain

    (#) sunfalling 2006-11-22 02:48:45 PM

    I really liked the imagery of Ryou in the pool, enclosed in water while Yugi watched anxiously. I don't want to say this is OOC, but I haven't seen Ryou this depressed in the canon, so I expect you'll give us a plausable reason for his desire to "drown" in the next chapter when you develop the plot more.

    Author's response

    Thank you for keeping an open mind about this fic! Yes, it'll become more apparent in later chapters. Once again, thanks for the open mind!
  • Chronic Pain

    (#) Lines 2006-11-23 12:57:13 AM

    See sunfall's review, as that pretty much covers it.

    Author's response

    XP
  • Chronic Pain

    (#) Sandra-Dark 2006-11-27 01:52:04 AM

    OMG CHRONIC PAIN! ^-^ love this fic gal glad its back up! I was hit with saddness that Ryou was drowning himself.. tears but very well done!

    Author's response

    Muwahaha YES Chronic Pain once again graces this world! Yeah, even though it only got so many reviews on ffn, it was on the favorites lists of a ton of people who emailed me wondering why the hell I took this and LAPAS down. They demanded that I leave them up for everyone to read because they were my best works. Do you remember LAPAS? Well, I'm gona tweak it a bit and repost.
  • Chronic Pain

    (#) kitsunetears 2009-09-26 06:56:56 PM

    I guess I'm a bit slow on the uptake but still felt like reviewing even if this never gets read.
    I got a strong overall picture of Ryou's mental instability and Yugi's need nurture and protect him, but there weren't enough details complete the puzzle so to speak. It could be that I'm missing something obvious but did you ever give an explanation of how Ryou lives through his drowning episodes? That was really the only thing that caught me up. Either way I enjoyed reading and hope there will be continuation.

Log in!




Register Lost password

Filter

You won't see stories with a lower score when you browse or search. Log in to adjust filter.
0

 

Featured Story

Site Stats

  • Authors: 608996
  • Stories: 40302

Recent Stories