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• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-21

  Ha ha, somebody calls ME a party person? That is ironic. ;)
  
  I can´t help but fall in love with these:
  a) Pete´s behavior resembling that of Jackson, especially the cartoon-watching part.
  b) That we got another puzzle piece of CoCo´s past.
  c) The Patrickness of it all. ;)
  
  You may proceed. :) Also, you may have a rating point.

  Author's response

  a) I'm glad you caught on because that was exactly what I was going for.
  b) Slowly but surely things will start making sense. I promise.
  c) Ahhh Patrick. What more can I say?
  
  Thanks for the rating point! puts in pocket

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) jessiearei 2006-11-21

  great story! i love it! cant wait to find out what happens next!

  Author's response

  Ohhh! I love new reviewers!! Thanks and welcome!!!

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-21

  i love how patrick and collette have weekly rendezvous. there is no way that doesn't lead to a relationship. well, maybe that's not completely true, because you can't have a relationship with someone who isn't in love with Elvis Costello. trust me, i've tried that. it doesn't work.
  
  the little peaks into collette's past make me giddy like a school girl. i'm trying to figure out what happened, and what didn't happen. gah.
  
  oh, and as a completely off-the-wall question, what's with Patrick and hard-ons lately? jeez, that kid needs to get laid or something.
  
  i especially love how patrick caught on to the fact that Jackson called her CoCo. hmmm...that Patrick, he's a smart fellow.

  Author's response

  Uh Oh, Patrick and Collette are doomed. She doesn't like Elvis Costello!! What now!? Just kidding :)
  
  I'm trying not to give too much oc Collette's past away...you know...to keep up the Drama-Rama as they say. I'm glad I made you giddy. That makes me giddy.
  
  I'll be more than happy to help Patrick with his hard-ons....who said that?
  
  Yes, Patrick is a smart fellow....hmmmmmm.

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) patrickdance4me 2006-11-22

  i love is story. seriously. update really soon so i can smile again, k? i love how you write long chapters too. that makes my day.

  Author's response

  I'm glad you like this story. I like long chapters too! I'm happy I could make your day. Your reviews make my day!!

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) howshesews 2006-11-24

  sings opera
  
  iiii looooooove thiiiiis.
  
  i suck at being a member of the DoJ...because i'm just now reveiewing. you understand my own drama-rama, so i think you can sympathize and not be mad at me a little, right? it's alright if you can't i guess, so to make up for it.
  
  I LOVE THIS STORY!!! it's so good. i love jackson. it reminds me of when my brother was 4. (i was 17). sniff.
  
  update, for me DoJ sister! i love this!

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