- Pretty interesting. It caught my interest when the girl transformed into that she-demon. I would continue it if I were you. I like this style of writing.
Author's responseGlad it caught your interest! Personally, you seem a little picky with what you read, so I was worried that you'd never find anythign of mine that you'd like! I'm relieved that you like this though. I had fun writing it!
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