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Unknown Name

Short and sweet, I promise.

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres: Angst - Characters:  - Published: 2006/11/24 - Updated: 2006/11/25 - 42 words - Complete

Reviews

• Unknown Name

  (#) PARCD 2006-11-25 08:41:56 AM

  I may not know your name, but I'm definately hunting you down because you deserve to die for printing these sucky-ass stories on this site. What about the starving children in Africa? They already have a hard enough life. If they read these stories, they'd probably kill themselves. That is the only thing that could make their lives worse than it already is. Trust me, I know.
  
  You know, you probably don't have much of a life if you can write so many stories (fucking crappy stories, at that). Do you have to jam twigs up your pee-hole to please yourself because nobody else will?
  
  I guess fucking yourself is the only way you'll get any. Because, anyone who does fall in love with you is either mentally challenged or preparing himself for a slow, painful death when they read your turds of stories and find out just how much you stink.

  Author's response

  This wasn't about me you retarded assfuck. This is a character's piece. Which means this was a character's thoughts put into poetic form. And I don't fuck myself, thank you very much. I'm not so low that I do that, unlike you, which is most likely why you keep saying things like that. And that comment about fucking my cat? You most likely only suggested that because you yourself fuck animals. Wow, you sick freak. I hope you drop dead while jacking off over that horse shit you're so obsessed over.

• Unknown Name

  (#) GR21 2006-12-04 07:55:42 PM

  i may not be as lengthy as the flamer but i liked it

• Unknown Name

  (#) KarmasMessenger 2006-12-07 03:10:10 PM

  I am guessing by your delusional self-importance that you are most likely a teenager. You have a very egocentric attitude and are in constant need of attention in whatever manner you can receive it. Unfortunately, this shows in your writing. You may grow to become a good writer, but for now, you are stunted by your own arrogance. You have much to learn, yet I do not think you believe this to be so. Hence, you are inhibiting yourself as a writer.
  Perhaps in a few years you will grow from this phase and actually improve. For now, unfortunately, your stories and poetry come across as very cliché. You, I am sure, see them as the most unique pieces in the world, which is a shame. They are banal and lifeless. In the future, I hope you are able to see past your own perceived greatness enough to create something original. For now, your stories are the same cookie-cutter teenage angst filled emo that every other low self-esteem driven teenager regurgitates and posts, believing it to be a true masterpiece.
  Well, maybe in time you will outgrow this juvenile stage. Again, please feel free to post a response as it will only support my theory.

• Unknown Name

  (#) MushroomCap 2008-06-14 08:32:00 PM

  KarmasMessenger...didn't you already post that review on another one of her stories?
  Sweetie, don't respond to them, it'll only encourage them and wastes space.

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