Wentz´s death does not stop the world from going round. It´s a shocker.
(#) CodeWordLove 2006-11-26 07:42:33 AMI don't think I've ever told you how good this story is. Very very original too I love it! supernatural things are fun and poor Pete in this story what a hell to be trapped in.
Author's responseWhy, thank you. It´s very interesting to write this. Thanks for the r&r! :)
(#) whatkatydid 2006-11-26 08:28:51 AMYou're lucky it's stopped raining for a few hours so I can get my head straight.
The lawyer's scene is amazing, I mean it, I was there with them, how you described all the mannerisms, the body language, the words. It was so moving.
You wrote Pete's feelings really truthfully too, the hint of his egotism coming through was just enough to sympathize with him and not want to smack the Emo growl off his face.
As usual, you raise the bar higher.
Nice work , seriously.
I feel my sincerity isn't coming through....but it should.
Author's responseThank you. I was worried that Patrick is a bit clichéd. Well, YEAH, he is and that´s how you know it´s Patrick, I guess. ;) I´m not gonna concentrate on Joe and Andy though. Because... well... their names don´t start with a P. ;)
Ok, raising the bar higher... well, I guess with the DoJ the limbo dance time is over.
(#) rawrlittledino 2006-11-26 08:43:52 AMI feel like I'm stuck between
1] Slapping Pete into next week for being such an Emo asshole.
2] Crying because the Wentz is dead.
3] Or maybe shouting at the others because he isn't.
I CAN'T WORK OUT WETHER HE IS OR NOT. God damnit.
Oh, and thank you for all your reviews on my one-shots =]
- - Imogenn
Author's responseYou´re more than welcome for the reviews. You write amazing one-shots.
Thank you for your emotional involvement with this story. That´s what I´m trying to evoke in the readers. :)
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-26 10:17:27 AM/The one in the middle rubs his thighs with his palms and finally brings his hands to his face, rubbing them across his eyes and cheeks a couple of times./- i pretty much cream myself over stuff like this. showing an actual patrick character trait. it's realistic and it provides ambiance to the whole setting.
i love the way you chose to display Pete's life, and how the technicalities of his life are being figured out without him.
i love pete describing patrick, and letting his ego speak for him for the most part, bashing patrick a little bit. again, very realistic and another one of those annoying character traits.
i'm going to have to agree with Katy on this one. you are raising the bar, twat.
on a totally serious note, you are doing amazing things with FanFic. i envy you. in fact, if you didn’t live in Austria i might have kidnapped you and made you write and claim it for my own.
Author's responseThank you for the praise on Pete characterizing Patrick and at the same time indirectly characterizing himself. Because that´s actually why I wrote it. Not so much as to picture Patrick but as to let the readers get a better insight into the way Pete´s thinking and ticking at the time being.
Please, kidnap me. So I can get my hands on a pack of roofies , change my name to Baldwin and show you a(n unconciously) happy time. Strange too...?
(#) patrickdance4me 2006-11-26 11:37:20 AMawwwwwwww. patrick, head of clandestine? hehehe. i can see him maybe doing the decaydance but clandestine? everyone will have never ending polos. :] and black rimmed glasses with little bats on them.
i am filling super sorry for pete. poor guy
Author's responseI, for one, actually prefer Patrick´s fasion sense to Pete´s. Not that he has any but at least he doesn´t claim to have one. (Except for when he´s singing lyrics written by Pete...)
- That's it...Your writing is too good. How can I compare to that? I can't. I'm done. No more fanfic for me. You head the game.
PS: I said 'head' ha ha ha.
Author's responseWell, I let you write more fanfic. All you gotta do is get ready for this, lovely. ;)
P.S: I say... I like how "Nice Spice" is turning into... well, you´re still nice. Work harder.
(#) xloveorsympathy 2006-11-28 03:12:44 PMwow, another one..another great one btw.
jeez dhgdwfh i wanna hit Pete over the head.Hard for being such a man whore, but at the same time i wanna hug him give him a cookie and tell him its gonna be alright. Seriously, this story is driving me insane, insane in a good way that is. I love the whole " Pete's dead ( or is he?) in a weird room with a TV that has a life of its own and all the emotional stuff you've written, its amazing actully
well, cant wait for the next.
Author's responseYeah, I´m suffering from fanfic diarrhea lately. Bad case, too.
I´m glad you´re having such ambivalent feelings for the protagonist because that´s what I was hoping to evoke in readers. That and maybe a date on Friday evening? No?... Well, maybe next time.
Thanks for the r&r. :)