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• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) moocow 2006-11-26

  "Patrick, I can read you like a playboy,"
  
  since when do people read playboy.
  knowing pete, he probobly does.
  "OOOOH. I found this really interesting article in playboy!"
  "What about the pictures?"
  "What pictures?"

  Author's response

  You totally know that is how Pete is...kinda ditzy at times.

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) whatkatydid 2006-11-27

  You are amazing young woman. I liked how Patrick vented through his music, that was hot.
  
  Anyways, i really must get on with writing my update, I get so caught up reading everyone elses stuff and talking about Patrick's Lunchbox on AIM, I get so distracted....no wait....that wasn't me - that was you lot, you bunch of pervs.

  Author's response

  I think I missed out on that AIM conversation about Patrick's LUNCHBOX...you will have to fill me in.
  
  I'm glad that you liked this update. I figured that I vent through writing, he must vent through music...right!?
  
  Keep on staying wonderful you wonderful reviewer and member of DOJ you!

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) duckapple 2006-11-27

  If I'm late for class tomorrow.
  Totally your fault.
  Up at 3am reading this.
  Addiction is not healthy.

  Author's response

  I'll totally take the responsibility for you. Next time, if you let me know ahead of time...I'll write you a note.
  
  I'm glad that I could fuel your addiction.

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) MMMramen 2006-11-27

  Well, you've done it again. You've captivated me with another story. I literally read all 5 chapters in one sitting, which is a lot for me. At first I thought Jackson was Collette's son. But then he was calling her CoCo, so then I didn't think he was hers. After I found out Collette has brown eyes and Jackson has blue eyes--like his mother--I definitely knew he wasn't hers. It's all coming together. I really like the suspense and uncertainty. But I'm nervous because I know Keifer will make an official appearance, but Patrick will save the day...right?
  
  Do we have to go? Did the bad people find us?" he asked sounding worried.
  
  I know this is terrible, but I kind of giggled at that because it so reminded me of the movie "Kindergarten Cop" when Dominick was trying to rig up some lasers to protect him and his mom from "the bad people." OK, now I'm rambling. Great story so far. :)

  Author's response

  I totally didn't think of Kindergarted Cop until you posted that. HA HA HA! That just reminds me of Arnold going: Who is your Daddy, and what does he do? HA HA HA!
  
  Hang in there, the drama will continue! Thanks for the review!

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-27

  Could he handle all of her baggage? No, certainly not. -> Is that because he [Patrick] has gained some baggage of his own in the course of the last months? Is it that I don´t even hesitate to insult Hat Rack just to appear to be funny because I´m Asshole Spice? I guess the answer to both of these questions is yes.
  
  I love the way Patrick uses music as a vent for his frustration and probably anger. It seems like an authentic Patrick thing to do. :) (That and being shamelessly cute.)
  
  ”Patrick, I can read you like a playboy,” Pete said… -> That´s the stuff, baby. Hilarious. Smooches.
  
  "Hey there, ninja," Pete said leaning down to block him from running into his privates as little kids tend to do. -> As little kids, Ashlee Simpson and the members of the DoJ tend to do if only given the chance.
  
  HA! (Sorry, the use of bold is totally inappropriate here.) I KNEW it! Jackson´s not CoCo´s son. I rock. Kinda. Sometimes.
  
  She found herself wondering what it would be like to kiss those lips and to wake up in those arms again. -> It´s pretty good, Collette. Take it from me. Ha.
  
  On a further (Asshole Spice) note, check out what I wrote in the review section of Crystal´s latest chapter. I got you beat, Stubborn Spice. ;)

  Author's response

  HEY! Be nice to Patrick! He's too nice to be rippin' on. Just like me :) Ha Ha....I'm just kidding.
  
  Thanks for the review. I'm thrilled that I got a smooches for being funny. It's slow going, but I'm trying!
  
  I'll have to look at your review on Crystal's story....what did you say???
  
  Stay wonderful!

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) patrickdance4me 2006-11-27

  aw. that was sweet! hehe

  Author's response

  Wasn't it though? I just can't make Patrick not look sweet. It just isn't possible.

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) Tawney 2006-12-20

  Aww im so happy! So sweet, i love the interaction between Collette and Patrick. Must read more.....XX

• Cloak and Dagger

  (#) riaryder 2006-12-28

  Hi, really slow girl here!
  I have just started reading your story, and just had to tell you I really love it. The playboy thing and the running into the privates thing made me laugh. And I LIKE PETE in this story. He is not an arsehole, which is new and original and kind of fun. Applause for you. Anyway, I will catch up :-)

  Author's response

  Thanks so much for the review. I'm glad that you like this story!! I LOVE your story by the way. It's the bomb.

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