Sasha opens up..... Yeah I suk at summarys
(#) MikeyWay 2006-11-29 11:12:31 PM
YAY! Chapter 2! I lurve it Gee! Good boy! Keep posting!
I like. I like a lot. Ray's adorable in this. Hell, the whole band's adorable, no matter what. I like Sasha, she seems like an interesting character. MORE FRANKIE!!!! Heh, sorry. Good job, please keep posting. This story= Love. UPDATE!!!
Oh come on... are you going to leave me like this waiting for long? Update! Pwease? pwetty pwease? pwetty pwetty pwetty pwetty pwetty pwetty pwetty pwease? Don't make me fill up this whole page of pwetty pwease's!!lol
great story! Please write more soon! The 2nd chap was pretty funny! ^__^ lotz of luv, ;)_Hannah_
Okay, yah i know i already reveiwed but i wanna update!! Crys pwease? Pwetty pwetty pwetty pwetty pwetty pwetty pwetty pwease? I'll give you a teddy Holds out teddy see? It's nice and soft! Oh come on... yu know you want thee teddy...... lol.
Yehaaaaa! I like!
this is funny and really cute!
(#) emo-girl 2010-10-07 10:22:12 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I LOVE THIS!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(#) Atsui-Yume 2010-11-23 04:07:06 AM
I like this a lot, but I'm gonna end up getting hated by a lot of people as I'm gonna be picky and just make a couple of points.
You've got a good intro for this, it's very realistic which is always good. My only thing is that to me it seems slightly Mary-Sue-ish. I don't think it's intentional but it makes me wonder whether this is going to end up that way.
Another thing is Grammar, on the whole it's good but I did notice a few inconsistencies with names and other areas, again, probably completely unintentional.
Apart from that I really enjoyed reading this and I'm looking forward to what will happen next.