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Chapter 5: Bruised Eyes and a Date

by KMidnite 3 Reviews

Love caught in the middle. Sorry for the shortness. Someone gets kissed, two kisses someone. Drama at it's finest, Ladies and Gents.

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2006/12/07 - Updated: 2006/12/07 - 967 words

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  • Tourbus Trauma

    (#) patrickdance4me 2006-12-07 06:35:02 AM

    ah i love it. this rocks. update soon!
  • Tourbus Trauma

    (#) xImRadx 2006-12-07 08:28:29 PM

    Ahh...Oh Em Gee!!!

    Holy good story Batman! Your story is amazing. I just finished chapter six was it? I've read the whole thing just wow...I really like the story line, and Its well writen, some spelling errors but other wise good.

    I REALLY enjoyed this story, like alot. You put my two FAVORITE bands in one story! How much better can it get!? I flipping love Pete! Its sorta upsetting that Ryan is a huge jerk cause im like a huge Ryan Ross fan...i hope he redeems himself, but I really hope she ends up with Pete. He's such a sweetie...and Brendon is just awsome. I heart him as well. I want him to tickle me!!! Oh geeze you got me rambling!!!

    Anyways, the Point here is, I FLIPPIN LOVE YOUR STORY AND IF YOU DONT WRITE MORE I WILL POKE IN THE TUMMY YOU WITH A VERY SHARP STICK!

    Err...sorry...heh. -innocent smile-
    Much luff to you!!
    Keep writing!

    Author's response

    Of course, I well keep writing!!! I love the story so much, I don't think I am going to stop soon. Thank you VERY much. It's reviews like that make me feel better and get my arse writing MORE!!! So word to the wise, keep sending reviews like this you guys!!! hahah. Like you guys, can see this. HA!!! I am not sure if I am that good of a writer, but thanks for telling me. Sorry, i am a Filipina, so I make lots of mistakes all the time. I am glad you love the story line. and something tells me you are not going to be THAT disappointed hint hint
  • Tourbus Trauma

    (#) xImRadx 2006-12-11 12:25:49 PM

    I figured, If noone else was gonna review and keep you motivated to write more, I just would again lol. I'll seriously review once ever day just to show you how much I love yor story if thats what it takes haha. I know, Im insane im sorry.

    Much luff to you!
    Cant wait for the next chapter!

    Author's response

    Thank you so much for ANOTHER review. Please don't review everyday, you just might get tired, you might not love it anymore. I am VERY sorry, I can't update for a few days, because of a wretched thing called school. But, I assure you, after Saturday, which for you Americans is Friday, updating will just flow, until about January 4. Love it?
    Thank you so much for all your luff and support. You are beginning to be my most faithful fan. Thank You!

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