I wrote this a while back while in a weird mood. It's about a couple (Yami/Marik) torn apart by war.
(#) MushroomCap 2008-06-14 08:18:25 PMI really liked this story. By the way, the first reviewer mentioned a car accident or something? I failed to see this in your story...I also noticed that there are several vile reviews on your stories, all of which have a very similar writing style. There is a 97% chance that they are all from the same person (I took writing analysis class last year, its an elective that teaches you to discover the writers personality from the the things they write.)
I also believe that there is a good chance that you know the person reviewing, and that they might be a friend of yours that is joking around.
Either way, I wouldn't worry about it. By the time I was a junior in High School I already had a poetry book published, and I can tell that you have talent, you just need to work at it a little more.